Can You Grade My Essay?

This is written well, but the conclusion is a bit too repetitive of the thesis, and the entire paper is slightly written as if it was with a cookie cutter. I prefer a varied words usage and sentence structure. Also, the thesis lacks some direction, and the opening sentence is weak - you should never "answer" an essay prompt like you have. It should be implied. You should describe more in the thesis about knowledge being a burden, instead of jumping right into why it isn't. both sides should be present - you should just begin arguing for your own opinion